Friday, February 12, 2016

Assignment One Draft: On Voices

Public Rhetorics and Writing Assignment One:

In lieu of a full draft, I offer my outline.  By Saturday I aim to have posted something more word-filled, but I would love any feedback at this stage, as well.

Core Inquiry: How have survivors of sexual assault emerged as a public, and what was necessary for them to do so?  I want to consider how a marginalized and silenced public is currently finding a louder and louder voice, while also questioning how their status as a public is empowering them to cross the remaining hurdles in order to address this prevalent issue.

P1: Current overview of the survivor public.  Consider what are their arenas, what and how are they circulating discourse, what challenges are they facing, how are they encouraging public participation, and how they are raising awareness and support from strangers who cannot relate to their experiences.

  1. Quote Dorothy Allison: "I tell my story louder and louder all the time;" the power of personal narratives when communicating publicly. Expanding what counts as evidence in public addresses (Ch. 9, p. 243).
  2. The Public Screen" (Ch. 9, p. 261)  Websites devoted to letting survivors have a voice, support forums, etc.  Twitter #whyistayed (changing conceptions).
  3. Shift from enclave to oscillating (from support groups to political power.)

P2: From victim to survivor.  How was the shift in language necessary to redistribute power?  How have emerging publics working towards similar language shifts (ex. the feminist movement) contribute to each other, and create overlapping public support?

  1. Public communication often frames all men as potential perpetrators and all women as potential victims.  How do products sold (ex. rape whistles) constitute public address of sorts?
  2. Who we're addressing: sexual assault warnings always aimed at women, rather than men.  Societal communication focuses on informing women how to protect themselves, rather than telling men not to hurt women.
  3. Current literature focuses on how sexual assault is about power and control rather than sexual desire-- how has this re-terming changed public perception?  How does renaming the issue include/exclude certain peoples?
P3: Challenging dominant thought.  Towards the end of his piece, Warner speaks on the power of the dominant discourse, that counter-discourses must find access points rather than completely go against the current public communication, if they are to be heard.
  1. What is the dominant discourse on sexual assault?  How is it treated politically? (Sterile, often without emotion or empathy).  How has the public of survivors combated this, and how has it restrained them?
  2. Habermas differentiates between presenting (owning) and re-presenting (standing for) in public communication (p. 50).  How have survivors presented their stories, and encourage others to represent them?
  3. Chapter nine in the book defined a public as "people coming together to discuss common concerns" (p. 236).  How has the survivor public made sexual assault a "common concern"?  I want to bring in Fraser's discussion of "private" to public problems here, and how certain issues were branded private and therefore not of concern of the larger public (touch on domestic abuse here, too.)  Fraser-- "Private and public aren't straightforward designations, but powerful terms to valorize and devalorize" (p. 73).
  4. How does this relate to the traditionally dominant masculine bourgeois sphere? (Fraser, 62)
  5. How do calls for "objectivity" illegitimize certain types of evidence and communication?
P4: Identity.  How has the emergence of the survivor public allowed survivors to foster a new identity?
  1. “The discourse of a public is a linguistic form from which the social conditions of its own possibility are in large part derived” (Asen, 75). How a public speaks empowers what they can do.
  2. Warner, how publics make us feel decisive about our personalities/rioles. (p. 62)
  3. How have survivors made their "survivor" role not their entire identity, but a crucial one in regards to public communication and change? Asen, 360.
  4. "Affirmative identities" (Asen, 346, 347.) As opposed to shame culture.
Conclusion: Discuss what works remain to be done, what challenges lie ahead, but how the process of survivors voicing their history and experiences and calling for meaningful change has not only led to raised awareness around a hugely detrimental social issue, but has also allowed the emergence of new identities for survivors, different from those society/their abusers gave them.





2 comments:

  1. Hey Anjeli,

    Your outline looks great and really well thought out.

    One thing that might add to your article would be to start with the history of the movement (including the influence of the second-wave feminism) and the main events or texts that pushed for this public to become less enclave and become an oscillating group. And also to include how long the movement has been pushing towards a new change. This might be a little too much. I don't know how much time you want to spend with the background. But it might give your readers a good introduction the movement and allow them to understand how it got to where it is. https://www.ncjrs.gov/ovc_archives/ncvrw/2005/pg4c.html is a good site for some of the history and influential pieces that spurred along the survivor public.

    Also your P2 about victim to survivor seems to be closely connected to the idea of identity. I would consider moving P4 to the place of P3 to allow the thought process to flow better from words that form identity to the ideas that you bring up in P4 concerning identity.

    One more thing that I might suggest would be to try and combine some of your points in order to leave yourself more free to hone in on some specifics. In P3 #2 you address the influence of personal testimonies. This might be included in P1 where you address how public participation is being encouraged. I understand a lot of stuff overlaps and without the sentence structure it might be hard to see how it will all connect best but I think the more you combine the less overwhelming your information will be to the reader.

    I think you have a lot of great stuff here and I am super excited to see it progress. You picked a great topic! I hope some of these ideas are helpful for your piece. :)

    Danae Hendricks

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  2. Anjeli,

    Thank you for sharing - this was an interesting and thought provoking read. I enjoy the flow, but I think I agree with Danae in that it might flow a little better if P4 was moved up as the discussion does seemed to be framed heavily around identity.

    Another question I have - and this might be answered throughout your entire work - but when exactly did survivors become a public and how did they get that done? During the reading I kept thinking about when survivors even became a noticeable counter-public? I want to say that, in the past, women in general have been silenced throughout history and women have faced even more obstacles when they attempt to discuss sexual assault. It seems like you have solidified your focus within the public sphere of sexual assault survivors, and I know addressing the history of how that discourse even came to be might be a little too focused - but that is just a reoccurring question I was thinking of!

    The overall flow and the points that you mention are terrific - I think it will definitely carry the average reader throughout the piece with ease, and in a understandable manner.

    Thank you for sharing!

    Erin Murdock

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